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Re: [OM] Active Voice instead of Passive

Subject: Re: [OM] Active Voice instead of Passive
From: Chris Trask <christrask@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Wed, 23 Dec 2015 06:55:14 -0700 (GMT-07:00)
>
>Agreed, but I think it's more subtle. Using the passive makes the 
>image the focus (oops) of the sentence, rather than the photographer. 
>I don't think there is selective use of pompous phraseology at play 
>here, but it might be subconscious modesty.
>
>An interesting question, Chris - well spotted.
>

     You could remedy the dilemma by taking the more detailed second phrase:

“This shot was taken with a half-frame Oly with 600mm ƒ2 lens and processed in 
LightRoom with a bit of help from Topaz Clarity.”

and instead using:

“This shot was taken by me with a half-frame Oly with 600mm ƒ2 lens and later 
processed by me in LightRoom with a bit of help from Topaz Clarity.”

     In all, though, when a person is presenting his/her own work we readily 
assume that all the mentioned action were performed by the presenter.  If we 
know that the work is presented by a third party, such as a museum guide, we 
assume that he/she is stating the methods used by the photographer.


Chris

When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro 
     - Hunter S. Thompson
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