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Re: [OM] Active Voice instead of Passive

Subject: Re: [OM] Active Voice instead of Passive
From: Andrew Fildes <afildes@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Wed, 23 Dec 2015 21:12:12 +1100
I’m with Chris here. I think the Passive Voice pretentious. It is as if they 
are speaking as a disinterested critic rather than the author. Imagine a 
painter stating that, "This canvas was rendered in green antipasto…” or a 
writer claiming that, “The script was processed in Word on on a Thunderclap Pro 
with a quad core chip…” Nonsense.
I suspect it is because we are still locked into the idea of photography as a 
product of the technology rather than a creative process, unlike other arts. I 
haven’t noticed it with Alt Process nerds who will say, “I chose Bromoil for 
this image because…” (“…it’s blurry, it smells bad, is tedious and could hurt 
me?”)
Not a matter of taste - a matter of attitude. Passive is grammatically correct 
but confusing, misleading and ambiguous.
Andrew Fildes
afildes@xxxxxxxxxxxxx <mailto:afildes@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
www.soultheft.com



> On 23 Dec 2015, at 6:52 pm, Nathan Wajsman <photo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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> Chris, I think this is a matter of taste. Gramatically, either way is correct.
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> Go take some pictures ;-)
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> Cheers,
> Nathan
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>> On 23 Dec 2015, at 08:18, ChrisB <ftog@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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>> Chaps and chapesses
>> 
>> Why do so many people use the Passive Voice when describing how they took 
>> their shot?  Virtually no one writes, “I took this with my field camera and 
>> 10mm ƒ64 lens.”  Most people use, “This shot was taken with a half-frame Oly 
>> with 600mm ƒ2 lens and processed in LightRoom with a bit of help from Topaz 
>> Clarity.”
>> 
>> Are they being coy or modest?  Does writing that way make them feel as if 
>> someone else took the shot – perhaps only to own up to the shot when they 
>> find that others like it?  Or does it make them feel important to use what 
>> they perceive as a formal way of describing the shot?
>> 
>> Well, the general principle that I have always adopted when writing is to 
>> use the Active Voice.  It has always been accepted that that is the clearest 
>> way to express yourself.  In the case of photography use of the Active Voice 
>> will ensure that all reading the description will know for certain who was 
>> responsible for that image.
>> 
>> Chris
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