Hi Manuel,
These are just my opinions and I feel uncomfortable offering critiques on
other folks stuff but, as you named me in your post, here goes.
I think #4 and #5 would be improved with something more substantial in the
foreground to build a 'bridge' into the picture. Great sky in #8 but in
burning it in you have taken the foliage down with it and lost detail in the
trees. #7 is a nice shot.
I would not have engaged in this slight negativity if were not for the first
three. I would put all of them in the 'wonderful' category ! They have great
tonality and composition and are a joy to view. Thanks for posting I am
looking forward to more.
--Graham
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From: "Manuel Viet" <oly@xxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: [OM] Vacation's memories...
>
> I've been very inspired by the creative use of filters I've seen on this
list
> by some members (namely, those by GeeBee, among others) ; while I do not
> pretend to achieve their wonderful results, I tried (hard) to produce a
> couple of decent pics this summer. Here are the first, still wet from the
> dark room :
>
> http://perso.wanadoo.fr/m-viet/bretagne/index.html
>
> Comments, good or bad, welcomed and appreciated. All pics made with my
trusted
> OM-1, on Pan-F, APX 100 & FP4+, with 28/3.5, 50/1.8 or 135/4 (forgetting
> zooms was part of the experience).
> --
> Manuel Viet
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