Thanks Bob - I concur about loosening up the crop a bit - just wanted
to know as a much tighter crop had been offered to me off list
Amities
Philippe
Le 20 févr. 14 à 18:44, Bob Whitmire a écrit :
> In my humble estimation, the portrait is still marvelous, but (you
> knew there was a but coming, didn’t you?), I think the crop is too
> tight. Lighter gone is good. I’d loosen up the crop a little bit.
> True, the face and the light show are the thing, and they are still
> there in the tighter version, but to my eye that bit of extra
> tablecloth and other space gives it a sense of something that is
> lacking in the tight crop.
>
> But wonderful either way!
>
> --Bob Whitmire
> Certified Neanderthal
>
> On Feb 19, 2014, at 4:02 PM, philippe.amard <philippe.amard@xxxxxx>
> wrote:
>
>> Thank you all !!!
>>
>> and special thanks to Ted and Bob, I don't think I deserve so much
>> praise though.
>>
>> Prompted by Larry, I revisited the shot and edited/doctored it a bit
>> further (the infamous lighter's gone, plus a tighter crop) Thanks
>> too.
>>
>> Could you let me know what you think of it?
>>
>> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Les+Gens/Mesmerized+Angel-4722.jpg.html
>
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