Gerry,
I like the colour and the tones a lot, but the composition does not do
it for me.
I'd try it again with either a wider or narrower view, but one that is
more "focused" on what you're trying to convey - and definitely
without cutting primary features in half unless you really can't help
it.
Dawid
On 11 Mar 2012, at 11:51 AM, Gerry Walden wrote:
> This was taken last year on my little Olympus E-PL2 with the 14-42
> lens fitted, and I have just gotten around to processing it and used
> LR4 for the task. I am quite pleased with the results. Amongst other
> tools I used the selective sharpening brush down the right hand edge
> to 'tighten up' the soft are.
>
> http://bit.ly/ykb4gl
>
> Thanks for looking!
>
> Gerry
>
> Gerry Walden
> +44 (0)23 8046 3076 or
> +44 (0)797 287 7932
> www.gwpics.com
>
>
>
> Gerry Walden
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