On Jun 13, 2010, at 12:54 AM, Moose <olymoose@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> On 6/10/2010 12:32 PM, Dawid Loubser wrote:
>> The gap between rich and poor have never been - even in our troubled past
>> here in South Africa - been as great as it is now. I generally don't like
>> photographing unfortunate people, and tried here not to focus as much on the
>> sitting man, as on the contrast of him and the scene behind him.
>>
>> http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/161/d/5/The_Gap_by_philosomatographer.jpg
>> (OM-1, 90mm at f/2.0, Ilford FP4+, 8x10in analogue print)
>>
>
> Nicely seen and captured. Still, your métier of very shallow plane of
> focus requires great care in focusing and has, to my eye, failed here.
> The lower legs in focus and face soft doesn't really work for me. I'm
> not sure I mind the soft face, but the part that's in focus seems wrong
> to me
To me the amount of focus on the man's face is just about perfect. It would be
difficult to get that by focusing anywhere else. I might like to see the car a
little more in focus to emphasize the social comment, but that takes attention
entirely away from the man. Tough photographic problem, but I think to call
the decision a failure is far from obvious, at least to me.
Joel W.
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