I think I see your hand and camera lens reflected near the virtual "ear".
Chuck Norcutt
Philippe Amard wrote:
> Thank you - just uploaded a crop version as suggested.
>
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Angels/
>
>
> thanks again
> Philippe
>
>
> Dawid Loubser wrote:
>
>> Hi Phillipe,
>>
>> The first one (angel in front of doorway) doens't strike me as
>> anything special, more like a snapshot to document the object.
>>
>> The second one I do like quite a bit more, with the selective focus. I
>> always like to apply the mantra of always asking myself "what can I
>> remove from this shot?" - i.e. every distinct element in my images
>> must be there because I like it to be there, otherwise it must be
>> removed, either via shallow DOF (my favourite technique for going
>> this) or via composition, the technically better technique for doing
>> this. In your shot, the semi-blurred, very bright building on the left
>> scream out to me, and draws attention away from the main subject. I
>> would tone it down or remove it by some means:
>>
>> - Selective darkening
>> - Cropping it away completely
>> - Making the DOF even shallower, though with a four-thirds body and
>> this angle of view, that may have not been possible
>>
>> As ever, my personal aesthetic opinion, nothing more.
>>
>> Dawid
>>
>>
>> On 16 Nov 2009, at 11:30 AM, Philippe Amard wrote:
>>
>>
>>
>>> Two shots of number 3 are up.
>>> The second of which can be seen large.
>>> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Angels/
>>>
>>> Thank you all for the feedback on number 2,
>>> please feel free to C&C, as usual.
>>>
>>> Bien cordialement de Metz
>>> Philippe
>>> .
>>>
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