Nice but I have difficulty with the foreground. I think it should be
either darker or lighter. As it is, the barely visible foreground
details keep drawing my attention from the sky and I'm straining to see
what's there. I suggest that you either make it darker such that I
can't see much of any detail or else bring the foreground brightness up
a bit so I don't have to strain to see what's there.
The sky might also benefit from being less saturated and a bit more real
looking but that I can't say for sure.
Chuck Norcutt
Guillaume Remy wrote:
> Hello all,
>
> Being mainly a lurker on this list, I'm submitting today my first pic !
> http://homeusers.brutele.be/guillaumme_remy/_tmp/index.html
> Taken with OM4, Tamron 28/2.5 on Fuji Sensia 200, this is the result from a
> Moose-like treatment
> from 2 different exposures...
> Any comments welcome...
>
> Guillaume
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