Hello all,
i finished a roll of film (haven't shot in a while!) and would like
some feedback on a couple of photos that i've uploaded to my site.
Remember that i'm a newbie, and be gentle with me :)
http://mr_shabby.tripod.com/zyan.jpg
http://mr_shabby.tripod.com/bryan_zyan.jpg
http://mr_shabby.tripod.com/erin_zyan.jpg
details: OM-2n, Vivitar Series 1 70-210/3.5, handheld (i know, bad!),
Ilford XP-2 Super. Pretty sure they were shot wide open or at f/5.6,
max, as i was using available light and bracing in a tripod position
on a table. The little girl is my neice, with my brother and
sister-in-law. She's a gorgeous kid :)
The scanning is pretty cruddy as it's a cruddy scanner, but it's all
i've got. basically i'm looking for feedback on composition,
technique, etc. The picture is much sharper on paper; the scanner
failed me there. I feel a little more depth of field would have
improved things, but still, i really like these three pictures. what
can i do better?
Sean D.
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